This is my elevator pitch #2. I took the feedback of being stationary in order for it to be easier to follow to heart. It made sense, so in this pitch, I stood stationary and had someone film it for me. I believe it made the pitch easier to follow, and even easier for me to deliver.
Hey Dylan! I thought you did a great job on your second elevator pitch. I could really tell the you took you feedback from the first, and made the effort to incorporate the feedback into this specific pitch. Staying stationary but using your hands made it quite professional, an it was good to hear that this tactic made the pitch easier for you.
Hey Dylan. I watched your first elevator pitch as well and I believe that this second one was much better compared to that one. You look very professional, your hand gestures are excellent in regards to what message you're trying to say, and it is a very nice setting as well. Having someone film it for you is good because it keeps you from pacing and staying stationary is key in a successful elevator pitch. Good work.
Hey Dylan! I thought you did a great job on your second elevator pitch. I could really tell the you took you feedback from the first, and made the effort to incorporate the feedback into this specific pitch. Staying stationary but using your hands made it quite professional, an it was good to hear that this tactic made the pitch easier for you.
ReplyDeleteHey Dylan. I watched your first elevator pitch as well and I believe that this second one was much better compared to that one. You look very professional, your hand gestures are excellent in regards to what message you're trying to say, and it is a very nice setting as well. Having someone film it for you is good because it keeps you from pacing and staying stationary is key in a successful elevator pitch. Good work.
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